- Need to improve spelling, be more accurate.
- Punctuation is key, i need to double check punctuation.
- Bibliography needs to be improved dramatically.
- Footnotes not set out correctly, need to go over them again.
- Go through media terminology and whatever has not been included so far needs to be added in; e.g. theories, ideologies etc.
- Expand on essay, make it more detailed and longer.
- More book quotes and articles on different artists. compare different artists and evaluate more videos on YouTube.
- Include more media terminology in essay, be more specific and explain more.
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